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托福寫作24分范例
 
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.


In my point of view, relationship is the most beautiful thing in the world, with which people could share all experiences, thoughts, and emotions. It connects all individuals together as a society. The beauty of friendship is that we can trust each other, break boundaries among individuals, love and be loved, which only exist in close relationships that take time to be examined. So I definitely agree that the importance of keeping old friends outweigh that of making new ones.


Old friends are endurable through times, which are an essential component in our lives. There are many things such as happiness, tragedy, disconnection that could happen among friends, and these comprise the real meaning of life. Among all the attributes in old friends, one thing should be mostly treasured, and that is trust, with which we can share all secrets without any consideration. "The friend in need is the friend indeed." Whenever we call for help, the old friends will always be there. While those qualities may not be found in new friends, even thought having new friends do contain some advantages.


However, many people argue that it is necessary to make more new friends. They hold this view for newly-made friends always bring us fresh-new ideas and life experience, thus people’s vision can be expanded. But this does not mean the drawbacks of making new friends can be ignored. It goes without doubt that when making new friends, much more time and energy are needed to invest, during which many unpredictable issues could emerge, like misunderstandings, disagreements or even conflicts. In this sense, there exist risks and threats to some extent, and those problems are something that old friend are less likely to contribute.


In my consideration, the benefits of the maintenance of old friends are obvious, which can benefit people in many aspects. While people may take risks in making new friends because of the above-mentioned uncertainties. Comparing the two models of making friends, I wold prefer to insist on old relationships.


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